Sweet
That was pretty cool. I've grown tired of stickfights, but this was decent.
One caveat: WHEN IT MEANS "YOU ARE", IT'S SPELLED "YOU'RE", NOT "YOUR". Ghod, people who can't spell tick me off.
Sweet
That was pretty cool. I've grown tired of stickfights, but this was decent.
One caveat: WHEN IT MEANS "YOU ARE", IT'S SPELLED "YOU'RE", NOT "YOUR". Ghod, people who can't spell tick me off.
Ameeeeba
Cool. I, er, don't get it. Good animation though.
Did you intentionally misspell amoeba?
Funny
Nice. The cutting was a little weird, but other than that, awesome. The egg joke had me rolling on the floor. Well, not really. But figuratively. You know.
Pretty Funny
I think my favorite part was just your menu screen... "ring goes on, ring goes off, ring goes on, ring goes off, ..."
The actual cartoon wasn't that good, but I enjoyed the making of section. I think you jokes need to be less... um... how do I say this... less like a naked priest in a bar came up with them.
I liked all the NG satire.
Not quite what I was expecting
After seeing your other work, I can say that this isn't quite what I expected. Though I saw that coming when I saw the style of jacket he was wearing.... Great job though, brilliant sound and animation, as usual.
Better
I've been following your work for quite a while. It was really good when I got hooked in, and then it got plain and generic. I'm not sure it was getting worse, it just wasn't changing.
But this one was better stylistically. Foamy had a different attitude than in the other cartoons, and the content had somewhat a different focus. But this wouldn't do all the time either :-).
I didn't like the last fan mail as much as this fan mail. Good work.
Potential
It needs some work, but it was pretty funny. You have a very Family Guyesque humor style. The jokes just need tweaking. For instance, when Waterman's ancestor is trading for the boat (very funny, btw), he needs to throw the sand in his eyes and then quickly run into the boat -- you lagged to long on his sand-saturated face. Things like that. Funny, though.
Age 39, Male
Programmer/Composer
Boulder, CO
Joined on 6/3/04